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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2006-01-13 02:38 PM




I came to think what is a poet?
even now I puzzle over it,
like a crossword I leave it on the side till later
but never seem to come back to it,
does it really matter?
The meaning used to be what the writer made
but now it seems to be the reader.

I recall reading Romeo and Juliet,
the worn pages read time and time again
too many times a year now neglected in the mind
a student always sighed,
but later on in life you stand in a bookstore
Romeo and Juliet sat amongst the poetry
and sigh once more on the thought,
but next to that you see the others
pages and pages of sonnets,
and mix and blend and erase the old
like memories you’ll create the new passages
and the old will come a shadow waiting to be told.

So like you I’ve become bored of poetry,
those books read too many times,
too many romance poems repeated,
that dust on the heart now settled with empty thuds,
and so I burn the old verses
watch them burn and dance in the flames,
but once they are gone I want them back,
so I begin to read other poets most of them which start
”I just begun to write a week ago”
because I know that these poems are clear
never aiming to be perfect to other's eyes.

And now I think what is a poet?
finally I’ve finished my crossword,
the weather changes season to season
come snow come sun come night,
it all has a certain order in this world
like me I learnt to breathe before I wrote,
but like seasons I did tend to change
and wrote instead of breathed,
because in words I finally knew
I am the poet
writing romance from my heart
so others can feel
what I have felt and learn
that living is a start.

© Copyright 2006 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-01-13 03:28 PM


Well done!

and then He created the horse...

iliana
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2 posted 2006-01-13 03:38 PM


Enjoyed this, but sure don't have a clue as to who it is.  I'll be watching to find out!   ...jo
RedStoneEB
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3 posted 2006-01-13 04:31 PM


Feel free to have a guess
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4 posted 2006-01-13 05:51 PM



A soft, flowing, piece of writing. It was as if you were whispering to the ears of a listener, rather than writing for the eyes of a reader. It was mellifluous and melodious.

Several poets came to mind. Wranx often writes in free verse of love and has a sort of easy, conversational style to his poetry. Magnus does as well, but he tends to use rhyme more often than Ed.

Hmmm. I'm going to have to ponder on this one a bit more. Whomever it is that you were emulating, they're very good! As are you!


Linda

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5 posted 2006-01-13 11:19 PM


A great piece, EB

I identify so well with your subject matter I wish I'd thought of it.

But I can see the other Ed here

could it be Ratleader?

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6 posted 2006-01-14 12:24 PM


Loved your poem and the concept, but have no idea to whom you are referring.

- Owl  

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7 posted 2006-01-14 12:48 PM


Hmmm, I see the Ratleader too.

Enjoyed

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

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8 posted 2006-01-14 12:53 PM


Well done!  I see Icebox in this?  I see him a lot actually.

"There's nothing worse that being an aging young person!" - Richard Pryor
               Carpe' Diem

iliana
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9 posted 2006-01-14 01:19 AM


Might it be Ice?  Or, possibly, Sunshine?
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10 posted 2006-01-14 04:23 AM


Yeah its IceBox hope i did him well enough
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11 posted 2006-01-14 05:49 PM


Well you must have - I was sure it was him Great job.
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12 posted 2006-01-14 07:06 PM


nice job, I can see him here:

So like you I’ve become bored of poetry,
those books read too many times,
too many romance poems repeated,
that dust on the heart now settled with empty thuds,
and so I burn the old verses
watch them burn and dance in the flames,




RedStoneEB
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13 posted 2006-01-15 04:14 PM


It's a shame IceBox hasn't replied to this one
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14 posted 2006-01-15 05:11 PM


It could be that he is elsewhere on the
weekends...never know.  I am certain that
he will be honored once he has read it.

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15 posted 2006-01-15 05:31 PM


RedStoneEB
The sincerest form of flattery. But I still feel you should be your own man.

littlewing
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16 posted 2006-01-15 05:50 PM


Red?

be grateful he graces us at all.

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17 posted 2006-01-15 08:44 PM


Wow, I read this when it was posted and could not figure out who it was; though, I have never been good at doing that.  Thank you.

I have said before that I don't write poetry by choice; I write it because I have to write it.

littlewing, you made me laugh.  That is what my mother used to say to others when I had stayed away in order to avoid her abuse.  It is good for me to laugh.

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18 posted 2006-01-15 09:24 PM


Absolutely Beautiful. I often wonder the same thing, and I believe you have captured the complexities very well!

A New Kid

littlewing
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19 posted 2006-01-16 10:39 AM


OMG I made you laugh, do I get a prize?  

Gosh that made me smile.

Is that the same as being called the prodigal daughter?




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