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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Yesterday I were alone today is still unknown Tomorrow my dreams may come My heart is undecided on the matter and my mind is too connected to reality in a system of the worlds logic speaking “love cannot be” and the heart stopped believing as the beats become numb and I looked into someone else’s eyes as if her soul wanted to tell me something and in the moments before she left I heard “love is below the minds reach In heart do we first learn to breath”. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
great work redstone , this is a beauty of a write ..peace and to new starts in 2006 howls |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
very nice write Red . . . will wait and see what othesr have to say, I have a few in mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm still thinking about who this could be.. but a great write though... Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'll be brave and hazzard a guess ~ "Wranx"? He too, is a philosopher of love and life! Lee, I am always affected in some way by your love poetry ~ as well as your poems on fantasy!  Warm hug, Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I'm going along with Earth Angel on this. Nice write; and yes, well said, especially those last lines.  ...jo |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I especially like the last two lines of this poem, too. It does seem that love makes life so much more alive...as if colors intensify. Your words indicate that until it actually happens, it's easy to regard love as a choice. Interesting... I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for the kind comment on my first post, Oceanside Evening! Karen |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow I loved this. I wonder who the poet could be - Juju -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
It sounds like me listening to advice given long ago by my mother. Also a little of my life right now. In any case, I like this VERY much and would like to place it in my library. From time to time I've written in a similar style, but very seldom. I can never choose a certain style. A definite treat for whoever you masqueraded as... miscellanea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Okay Lee...time to let us know who this is.. I have a feeling Wranx too... but, just may be wrong. Time to tell us!  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
To be honest i've forgotten who it is supposed to be |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Wonderful as usual Red. I heard “love is below the minds reach In heart do we first learn to breath”. That blew me away. Keep em coming. Cheers - Ed Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it". |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Well I guess we will never know.. However nicely done!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"looked into someone else’s eyes as if her soul wanted to tell me something" Strong write. Enjoyed. |
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