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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2006-01-11 06:24 AM



When my world comes crashing down,
my smile turns into a frown,
where do I go for my security?,
you are my soft place to fall,
my santity,

When the harsh coldness of the heart,
starts to freeze each and every part,
let me run into you warm loving arms,
to feel the warmth of your love,
to let your warm love melt me,
my serenity,

(chorus)
Baby, you're all the love needs to be,
with your loving arms surrounding me,
I can take on the whole world,
I can fly free, and touch the sky,
your love gives me liberty,

baby, you're all that love needs to be...

(still working on the other parts)  


J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

© Copyright 2006 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2006-01-11 06:34 AM


Seems great to me so far...cannot wait for the rest ..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-01-11 08:20 AM


if we could only learn to love and trust ourselves as much...this would be endearing to a spiritualist...
beautifully written and expressed

Georgiegirl
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since 2006-01-30
Posts 8

3 posted 2006-01-30 06:38 AM


I can hear it....Very nice!
ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2006-01-30 10:05 AM


music of the Heart ....

       it has an everlasting beat
Ct

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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uk
5 posted 2006-02-06 05:00 PM


I figured it out you must be the female romance writer and me the male romance writer althrough it took me awhile to find a piece of your work its not how many poems or songs we write its the meanings contained within them
sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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Wyoming USA
6 posted 2006-04-12 06:57 PM


ARH,

Are you finished with this? I must say I like it and well borrow it maybe?

Rich

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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7 posted 2006-04-13 07:04 AM


Came back to view this again and saw it through more kindly eyes...thank you..

Goldenrose

http://wordsthoughtsfeelings.blogspot.com

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