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tracie66
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0 posted 2006-01-11 06:13 AM



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Caressed the moon
on starry night
dreaming sweetly
holding tight

Caught the tail of the sleepy moon
....not coming home, anytime soon

So here I lay
my head to rest
dreaming peacefully
my moon caressed

Soft emerald clouds
with fluffy peaks
enter the sky
the stars they seek

Surrounding me now
upon my sleepy moon friend
my sweet dreams
soon to end
~~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-01-11 08:26 AM


charming write, which now makes me want to go take a nap, thank you very much...hehe

enjoyed

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2 posted 2006-01-11 08:41 AM


TracieGal~
You KNOW this moon-a-holic is LOVING IT~

I feel there is a beautiful muse working her magic with you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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3 posted 2006-01-11 09:18 AM


Tracie, this is especially lovely.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

tracie66
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4 posted 2006-01-12 04:42 AM


Hi Lee  
How was your nap?
so glad you enjoyed, thanks for your reply.
~hugs~
Tracie

_____________________________________________

Oh yeah sweet Marge girl, my celestial muse is having sooo much fun and I'm just lovin it.
~hugs~
Tracie

_____________________________________________

Dear Chris~
thanks so much for that lovely reply, appreciate it.

~hugs~
Tracie


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2006-01-12 09:53 AM


This needs to be bumped...

enjoyed Tracie.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

tracie66
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6 posted 2006-01-13 12:56 PM


Dear Susan~
Thanks sweetie

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



OwlSA
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7 posted 2006-01-13 11:59 PM


Much enjoyed, Tracie.  What a comforting and relaxing experience!  It's a pity that the dreams had to end so soon, but you can always go back again!  

- Owl

iliana
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8 posted 2006-01-14 12:09 PM


Tracie, this is just wonderful to read on this sleepy Friday night.  Lovely writing and nice graphic, too!   ....jo
tracie66
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9 posted 2006-01-14 05:47 AM


Owl~
yes it's wonderful that we can return. I'm glad you enjoyed my write and thanks for your reply

~hugs~
Tracie

Hiya dear Jo~
so pleased that you enjoyed my little write sweet dreams

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Kethry
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10 posted 2006-01-14 05:02 PM


Tracie, you're right up there with the stars in this write.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



tracie66
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11 posted 2006-01-15 03:18 AM


aawww....you're a sweetheart dear Lynne, thanks for your lovely words.

~hugs~
Tracie


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Rex Allen McCoy
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12 posted 2006-01-15 02:29 PM


Hi Tracie ... wish I could grab a piece of this sleepy moon ... trouble sleeping lately

such a wonderful read

The Lady
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13 posted 2006-01-15 11:27 PM



Lovely.

mighty mouth
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14 posted 2006-01-16 02:09 AM


very peaceful. i felt very one with this piece.

mighty mouth
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15 posted 2006-01-16 02:11 AM


oh, and AWESOME visual by the way. i usually prefer to see the picture through the words, but that picture made the piece that much more enjoyable
tracie66
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16 posted 2006-01-20 06:09 PM


Lady~
Thanks n ~hugs~
Tracie

mighty mouth~
I so pleased that you enjoyed this so much

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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