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Lesson STILL Not Learned
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Lesson STILL Not Learned |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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It hurts this time I didn't think it would (though this time I still love you) but it does Sitting here watching my heart break into a million pieces I should have known it would happen I was being overly optimistic that it wouldn't I just didn't think it would hurt |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
It always hurts. But you'll never get it right if you give up. And I'm positive you'll get it right. After all, you deserve the best!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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weepingwillow Junior Member
since 2006-01-09
Posts 33Sin City-Las Vegas |
I agree with Larry C. For i was just there up until 3weeks ago... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
It never doesn't hurt. But when struggling against the tide, the best thing to do is just float with it -- my daughter told me that and I like it. ....jo |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
It hurts this time I didn't think it would (though this time I still love you) but it does Sitting here watching my heart break into a million pieces ~a write that knows the tears of the heart love is strong and it is beautiful and always seems to find a way to hurt the most.. good writing ~wolfie " the only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams " - tupac shakur |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Larry's right... It always hurts. But if we're lucky... it hurts a bit less... and over time... still a bit less... until it's bearable. I liked this very much! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I understand. I hate it when I hurt! But then, sometimes I think maybe it is a good thing to have the ability to feel. Good things will come just as others have indicated. Hang in there, Skyfire. miscellanea |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I like that the good stuff comes back.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
He may have hurt your heart, but please never allow your magnificent sky fire to dim! You are beautiful, bright, talented and kind! Giving you a loving, comforting ~ and understanding hug, EA |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Skyfire, you know what you need to do. After all, who gave your poem the title: Lesson STILL Not Learned (capitals and all)? Light your flame, lift your eyes and fly into your sky on the wings of Pegasus, and make your loneliness turn into peace. You deserve so much more than this man - but only you can break free! The right man will find you, or you will find him. - Owl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh sweetie my winged ~hugs~  floating your way - it does always hurt but don't ever give up on love, take care.Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe — W. E. Channing |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
I am where you are and trying to take wings and fly... lets gather the strength together and sour above the hurt. Hugs, Fee Expressions, |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great writing Rhonda. Andrew Mine are phyrric victories. |
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