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0 posted 2006-01-10 01:00 PM






            ~~~~~
       torn and tattered
       yesterday's dreams
       drape themselves
       wearily over
       Hope's closet door
       desperately in need
       of the
       healing stitchery
       that can only
       be administered by
       Life's expert tailor -
             Faith

             ~~~~~  




    


© Copyright 2006 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-01-10 01:57 PM


AMEN!!!!

Wonderful

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2 posted 2006-01-10 02:13 PM


Now this poem actually was written for someone in here, and I am sending it to her right now - Hope, here it comes  

Nicely done Chrislane.

Carpe' Diem

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3 posted 2006-01-10 02:17 PM


i ike you intertwined faith and hope
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4 posted 2006-01-10 02:26 PM


How'd you know I didn't have a door on my closet?



Faith. Sometimes I forget about that part.

yer lovely Chrislane...

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5 posted 2006-01-10 02:52 PM


Thankyou dear poets. We all need a little faith now and then. Hugs!
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6 posted 2006-01-10 03:52 PM


Excellent write Chris...well said!
~Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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7 posted 2006-01-10 04:07 PM


The images in this this write are brilliant, vivid and most of all soothing. Wonderful poem.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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8 posted 2006-01-10 04:08 PM


Nancy Lee - miss you too! Hugs!

Kethry - thankyou for you kind comments. hugs!

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9 posted 2006-01-10 10:43 PM


Chris such a beautiful , touching caring thought , this was special indeed and just what I need

Hugs Hope


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10 posted 2006-01-10 10:59 PM


I am so glad that you liked this Hope.
Thankyou and big hugs !!

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11 posted 2006-01-11 12:12 PM


Chris, can I just tell you how much I love this one!!!!  I LOVE THIS ONE!!!  Saving it.   ....jo
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12 posted 2006-01-11 09:16 AM



awwww....thankyou jo !!
Big hugs to you !!

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13 posted 2006-01-11 06:32 PM


My dreams could use some repair work. I like this one.
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14 posted 2006-01-11 06:37 PM


AMEN,  and now if we can just remember this
when the swamp is filled with alligators
and someone just pulled the plug out of the
bottom!!!

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15 posted 2006-01-11 07:03 PM


Thankyou ManofWolves, glad you enjoyed.

Magnus...lol...thankyou my friend. hugs!

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16 posted 2006-01-11 07:56 PM


A VERY NICE WRITE, RIGHT ON CHRIS.....PAUL

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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17 posted 2006-01-11 08:16 PM


After the day I had, it was nice to read something peaceful and positive.  Thanks so much for posting this piece.  I really do love how good it made me feel tonight.

Anne Shiever

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18 posted 2006-01-11 08:19 PM


Paul & Anne - thankyou both so much. Hugs!
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19 posted 2006-01-11 10:54 PM


Lovely...James
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20 posted 2006-01-11 10:59 PM




Nice work...



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21 posted 2006-01-11 11:03 PM


Thanks & Hugs James & Lady !!
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22 posted 2006-01-14 01:28 AM


This is absolutely divine. A wonderful piece and I love the title. It is  a little well wish for all. Brilliant! Just thought I'd let you know how much I enjoyed it.
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23 posted 2006-01-14 12:25 PM


How nice of you EvoV2 ! Thankyou so much.
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24 posted 2006-01-14 09:12 PM


Chris,

   I love the message and the skill with which you sent it!  Very clever.  Very pretty and a pleasure to read!

cathy

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25 posted 2006-01-14 09:16 PM


Thankyou Cathy, I appreciate your comments.
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