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Huan Yi
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Waukegan


0 posted 01-10-2006 10:55 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


To see
By a glance
Your life
Would have been different

To feel it
Rush through memories
As never were

To watch a sun
That might have been
Set at dusk on a neighborhood

A picnic table
Under the shadows

Toys
A children’s swing
In the yard


© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-10-2006 11:36 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Huan Yi
Each blink is a wink. Enjoyed
Dominique-Simone
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2 posted 01-10-2006 12:51 PM       View Profile for Dominique-Simone   Email Dominique-Simone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dominique-Simone

Great job
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just out of reach


3 posted 01-10-2006 12:54 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

John, why does this write make me feel sad?
Your writings always bring wonderment.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

iliana
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4 posted 01-11-2006 01:02 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

How wistful the feel of this one!  Well done in creating that mood.   ...jo
Drauntz
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5 posted 04-23-2007 12:25 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

life is beautiful and your poem made it even better.

love to read this one.
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


6 posted 10-28-2007 03:50 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

enjoyed '

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