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Fee
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since 2000-08-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2006-01-10 06:11 AM


This is an old one which I have had published, I am not sure if I ever shared it with my family at Passions, I hope you like it.

This is written on my feelings for the most important person in my life, My Soul Mate.


Breathtaking is this mystical vision
of incredible beauty.
As perfect as the ocean
embracing the descending sun.
I am left breathless.

Such beauty is indescribable,
as uncontrollable emotions
awaken within me.

Creating perfect reflections
from the depths of my soul,
as though ona collision course
with destiny, I am captivated.

Precious and treasured moments
Shared, as the vision I see
before me is perfect.

A vision which will remain protected
within the haven of my heart,
Always & Forever
FH 2003

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2006 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-01-10 08:58 AM


beautifully expressed...enjoyed
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2 posted 2006-01-10 03:38 PM


This is a very beautiful love poem.
I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for
sharing your heart with us.
Hugs,
Ethel

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