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weepingwillow
Junior Member

since 2006-01-09

Posts 33
Sin City-Las Vegas

0 posted 2006-01-09 10:25 PM

Haunted
Daily images, vivid
Creep in slowly
Flash, like photographs
Of the past

Plagued by diseased sadness
Sickening your unfound happiness
Engulfed in an angry sea
Trapped underneath the current
By your inconsolable pain

The light of the sun
Creating shadows, leading
You into its eclipse

As I sit here
Basking in your crimson emotion
Screams, breathless and booming
Erupt, volcanically into your ears

“Transfuse your secrets
Perform your enigmatic dance
Tis not I that has caused your
Conscious-stricken actions”

Silently,
As a comics hero transforms
The alter-ego that’s within you
Steals your eyes
Placing them in your front shirt pocket
Then merging, I am left
Alone with your back to my heart

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

1 posted 2006-01-09 10:30 PM

All I can say is WOW!!!

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

2 posted 2006-01-09 10:34 PM

I am sorry, this is sad. But there are those who do not wish to be helped, and it is not the fault of those who wish to help.

Nice write,
Kristabell

weepingwillow
Junior Member

since 2006-01-09

Posts 33
Sin City-Las Vegas

3 posted 2006-01-09 10:36 PM

Thank you both...

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

4 posted 2006-01-10 04:57 AM

"Silently,
As a comics hero transforms
The alter-ego that’s within you
Steals your eyes
Placing them in your front shirt pocket
Then merging, I am left
Alone with your back to my heart"

beautiful. lovely. xxx

farewell the ash-tray girl

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

5 posted 2006-01-10 05:29 AM

what and ender nakia your a great writer

~J

Then merging, I am left
Alone with your back to my heart

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2006-01-11 01:01 AM

As a comics hero transforms
"The alter-ego that’s within you
Steals your eyes
Placing them in your front shirt pocket
Then merging, I am left
Alone with your back to my heart"

What a verse! Very creative.

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