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weepingwillow Junior Member
since 2006-01-09
Posts 33Sin City-Las Vegas |
Your emotions running with the tide flood in every direction drowning my reality with each word you speak incompetent when using logic everything he says is law you battle inside, but your ears tell you it’s for the best Self programmed a machine reacting on command, deficient of self control has caused your addiction for what once was prohibited from me by you men |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This is powerful.. Welcome to piptalk... |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Oh yes, I spot a bit of humor in this, dark humor, but I like it, and I understand what you mean. Kristabell |
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weepingwillow Junior Member
since 2006-01-09
Posts 33Sin City-Las Vegas |
Thanks for taking the time to understand the meaning of this poem ladies... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to Pip! Agreed, a powerful write! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"you battle inside, but your ears tell you it’s for the best" oh, that's a cool line one that many can identify with |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
Very powerful, write. The words you utter are true to form. I wish I could defend my sex, but it would be a frivolous debate as I would be lieing. Welcome to piptalk, everyone here shall take good care of you. I know they did it for me. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, I can understand this. One has to look very deep to love men nevertheless but we are befitted for it. That is our gift. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome to Pip! Enjoyed your first post and look forward to reading more. Please check your email for a special greeting! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Much enjoyed your first post Welcome to the Passions family Have fun here hugs, Chris  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Nice work. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hoo, there are some deep layers in here, some that I would like to explore further and some I done ever want to think about investigating. Excellent job and welcome to Passions. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I understood your words all to well, from previous experience. Enjoyed your first post, and hope you will enjoy the community of poets at Passions, welcome. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
weepingwillow....I too understand your poem from experience...well written! Welcome to Passions!!  |
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weepingwillow Junior Member
since 2006-01-09
Posts 33Sin City-Las Vegas |
Thank you all... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
well penned! welcome to PiP and enjoy! ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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