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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2006-01-09 08:37 PM

Dreams of Dreams

I had a dream that my father went bald
I was in the arms of the man I loved...
but if life was not real and well my dreams
They're what I made them; so I went to sleep

And so I dreamed that I dreamed, of freedom
Life was distant and became its own dream
and I was surrounded by fantasy
Much of every thing felt like a large leep

And so the woman sets under the tree
looking for the man at the info desk
To answere the question she wants to ask.
How much of her weeken heart she should keep?

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

1 posted 2006-01-09 10:49 PM

She should keep every single bit of her heart because having a weakened heart is definately better than having no heart at all.

Enjoyed,
Kristabell

poe
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

2 posted 2006-01-10 02:21 AM

The question brought to life in this poem needs to be answered. To bad it is rhetorical.
Excellent write.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

3 posted 2006-01-10 03:18 AM

And so I dreamed that I dreamed, of freedom
Life was distant and became its own dream
and I was surrounded by fantasy
Much of every thing felt like a large leep

these lines sparkle with the magic that a dream holds within , well written juju you captured it with grace,
dreams happen to be my favorite subject of all

~J

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2006-01-11 12:54 PM

Juju, I think this is one of your best!

...jo

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2006-01-14 04:06 PM

Wow thank you for all of your comments I truelyappriciate them. Please excuse my tardyness in answering. My brother is on EverQuest all the time when I was home. My frieds were looking for my obituarry in the newspapers.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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