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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2006-03-08 06:49 PM

cold
raining
three pigeons
in somber colors
troll the parking lot of the drug store
feet splayed
heads bobbing
old Orthodox men
discussing
muttering
arguing
a point
of law

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-03-08 06:51 PM

lol, I love it!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-03-08 06:58 PM

Thank you Kacy!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2006-03-08 07:37 PM

Yep...can see it just the way you painted it. Very good!

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

4 posted 2006-03-08 07:52 PM

Ha, this is priceless. Coming from a whole family of lawyers, I know exactly what you mean. Lol. You're a gem, has anyone ever told you that? Because you are. - Ed

“True absurdism is not less but more real than reality”
- John Simon

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-03-08 09:52 PM

Thank you Martie!

Oh Ed! What a nice thing to say. Ah yes… you know the men I’m talking about. Three men, four opinions.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2006-03-09 12:43 PM

LOL , enjoyed this , it took the reader right to the scene

Hope

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

7 posted 2006-03-09 04:08 AM

short and powerful!

Ixtab
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 105
MEXICAlpan de las tunas

8 posted 2006-03-09 04:24 AM

very interesting, i always did like poems that can convey many feelings, sometimes mixed feelings with very few words. Yet few words as they are, they convey poetic power and meaning.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2006-03-09 10:12 AM

~ A very vivid vignette!

EA

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

10 posted 2006-03-09 10:39 AM

excellent!

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

11 posted 2006-03-09 03:19 PM

Well done, I *saw* it through your eyes!

and then He created the horse...

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

12 posted 2006-03-09 03:21 PM

Thank you all so much.

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

13 posted 2006-03-09 06:47 PM

Yep... LOVE this! I cannot get that picture out of my mind, and each pigeon has a different voice LOL

Caroline

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

14 posted 2006-03-09 11:18 PM

Thank you Caroline. They surely do have different voices.

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

15 posted 2006-03-10 12:56 PM

This was well Written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

16 posted 2006-03-10 01:12 AM

Thank you WindWalker. I love your name.

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

17 posted 2006-03-23 10:03 PM

Pigeon Poems make me smile...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

18 posted 2006-03-23 10:21 PM

I LOVE THIS!!!

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

bubblesleave
Member

since 2006-03-04

Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

19 posted 2006-03-23 11:34 PM

You DOOOO

have a way with words!

(to say the least)

Bubbles

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

20 posted 2006-03-28 05:51 PM

I’m glad Page. I can’t help it…. I just love them. Thank you.

Thank you so much Enchantress!

Thank you Bubbles.

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