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The Gospel |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643
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It was funny To see them compete Two women, short hair with a mans Jaunt, speaking about the weather The third off in the corner Quietly serving her sentence as The “girlfriend” Creates small talk, with the wind Speculating deceitfully about motives The third Stands stiff as she notices that they are Completely Unaware of her. Silly as it may seem, They flirt furiously, giggling inside their souls And those without eyes Pass by them quietly, listening to Their steps, While they sing and pray The gospel How funny it was That today It should matter that these women Were talking. |
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weepingwillow Junior Member
since 2006-01-09
Posts 33Sin City-Las Vegas |
This was good...Keep writing... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I really enjoyed this one. Nice work. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thank you both so much |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is so very good, Dominique. A subtle message, but I have eyes today, so back to the top with you.  I love people watching m'self. |
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