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Masquerade Challenge |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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I cry, aloud on bended knee crippled to some degree a pastry pie begging to be bread but just bled instead Cringing in sight of shadow I shuddered, screaming to myself enough - bound in cuffs with thumbs tied tight And I cannot paint nor draw or place my lines of black to gray upon this face wrinkled fine from time I decline - an artist's eye I would rather be pastels contrast of myself - yellow lending hue to green bruises strike anew, I knew What must be done yet close my eyes to sleep. ~~~~ Forgive me, I tried. /pip/Forum7/HTML/000672.html |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue, I am not very good at identifying the subject of a masquerade. Okay, I'll hazzard a guess ~ Serenity Blaze? ~ Oh, but on second thought, it couldn't be her because she doesn't have any wrinkles!  In any regard, this was a vivid and fascinating portrayal of somebody and their writing!  Linda |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Great job Sue! With the "inner rhymes" I am going to guess Karen as well... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Sue..I too believe this to be much like the style of our Serenity. Challenge well met! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yep...it's a very good poem about Karen! We are right, are we not? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I like it! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I'll never tell . . . and thank you. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Good job! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You'll never tell? I make it a general rule that if I am being "done", I like to know about it.  Okay, so it's a relatively new rule, but nevertheless... (Normally if I can't tell I'd check my clothes for clues, but that ain't gonna work in this particular case.  )OH well. I don't care if yer doin' me or not, it's damned good. I-cannot-believe-I-just-typed-that.   Love ya suzy q! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
nice job sue, definitely karen in there and i'd like to say that i'd like to know if karen is being done too, pictures should be taken and sent to me [This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-09-2006 04:28 PM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yes I have to agree this is Karen. *smile* Oh I'm enjoying these.. Well Done Susie. M  how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Man, you guys got me - rather Karen . . . *laughing here* Have you any clue how difficult it was to do you? *grin* In writing, I mean, I really don't think it would be that difficult in person. (Look what you guys do to me) I am just glad you like and glad it was recognized. Love you too, K . . . Thank you guys for guessing. Karen has taught me so much about everything, between her and Ed, I need not pick up another book again. (Between all of you actually) (and THAT comment can stay at it is tyvm, although it would be nice.) Constant inspiration, Lady, that is what you are . . . |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Constant inspiration, Lady, that is what you are . . . indeed m'lady is... and Susie? so are you lil one  A perfectly met challenge. doin the library thing m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You did her proud, m'friend. . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice job here |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sorry I'm late but it's a good job! |
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