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Moonlight - Sunshine
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Moonlight - Sunshine |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Take the moonlight from my heart and a little sunshine from my soul Place them in the palm of your hands let your body soak them whole Bathe yourself in moonbeams feel them soft upon your skin Smooth on a little sunray and let it soak right in Feel the warmth & brightness start to flow within your veins capturing the joy & happiness your heart & soul now retains ~~~~ If you can think of a better title please let me know, as I think mine isn't so great. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A nice uplifting poem here..enjoyed the write.. Thank you... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, I don't know...seems the title fits the poem just right... all the way around.  Very nice, Tracie! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you, Tracie, for the moonlight from your heart and the sunshine from your soul! I can feel your warmth and brightness already flowing in my veins and I am experiencing joy and happiness! You have a beautiful "heart and soul"!  Loving hug, EA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It reminded me of a recipe...for serenity!  Seriously though, it was a rather like a bit of guided meditation. Loved this. Love you.  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~beautiful~  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
this made me feel warm and fuzzy, made me smile big. lovely Tracie Mxx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love this, and the title....  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Tracie66, this is smooth as silk! Good job!  ....jo |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I think the title fits just nicely. Great poem to give up that lil reboost we all need sometimes Julie |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
It is so sweet... Nice write |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
This is Beautiful! Very much enjoyed, Kristabell |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ It is so good to see you writing again, heck fire ... I almost wouldn't care if it was just titled 'Another Beauty By Tracie'~ Girlie girl ... this is so beautifully penned ... and I think the soft touch of moonlight sheds just enough light to lend itself gently to the bathing of the sun~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Take the moonlight from my heart now thats the way to start a poem i love it !!!! peace ~J |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
I think that the title fits the poem perfectly, it makes me want to see the moon tonight and reflect in beautiful thoughts. Hugs, Fee Expressions, |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It was the title that brought me to this one! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
OMG!!! Look at all of you shining here tonight  WOW!!! thanks to everyone of you for such beautiful and uplifting replies, I appreciate everyone of you and thank you from the bottom of my heart, for reading and responding to my poem. winged ~hugs~ floating in all directions.Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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ManOfWolves28 Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83 |
I can imagine the perfect day in every part of this poem. I like stuff like this. May the winds sweep through the moonless sky.... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi ManOfWolves28~ Thanks for your reply and I'm pleased that you enjoyed my poem. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
how beautiful! maybe just title it ~take the moonlight~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear midnitesun~ love your name, appropriate for my poem actually thanks for your kind comments and the suggestion of title - which I think is beautiful but I think I'll keep titled 'moonlight - sunshine' for now...thanks again. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Perfect just the way it is Tracie. Delicate. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
The poem is beautiful, and the title fits perfectly and then He created the horse... |
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kevinbrianwright Junior Member
since 2006-01-19
Posts 35NYC |
Lovely!!! |
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MacPoet New Member
since 2006-01-20
Posts 3California |
I looked for the greatest number of posts and am glad I did. This was soo.. sweet and lovely it even counteracted the evening news  . I loved the concept and most particularly the title.MP |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks so much, I appreciated your comments and the fact that you took the time to read me ~hugs~ to you allTracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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