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Fee
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2006-01-09 03:10 AM


The circumstances around us
Will always be a little tough
But know my arms are around you
And that I love you so very much

Some days will be a little harder
The sky’s will appear grey
Those times that we are kept apart
From the storms that pass our way

Like an anchor in the ocean
You will always find me there
Riding out the storms with you
Reminding you how much I care

So hold onto me when things get rough
I will help to guide you through
For together our hearts belong as one
Forever Me and You
FH 2005

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2006 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2006-01-09 03:57 AM


This is so beautiful, and so like the
way my Honey-bear and I feel about each other.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
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2 posted 2006-01-09 04:23 AM


Mmmmmmm, I really like this one.  Saving it to the library.  
tracie66
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3 posted 2006-01-09 04:54 AM


oh wow! this is so gorgeous, very heartfelt write..thanks for sharing.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



whiskey
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4 posted 2006-01-09 09:37 PM


So sweet and loving wonderful writing enjoyed very much

Julie

Kristabell
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5 posted 2006-01-09 10:47 PM


Nice write. And yes, I am feeling the same way right about now with someone too, and sometimes it gets a bit rough, but that caring you capture so well and simply, is what keeps it together.

Kristabell

poe
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6 posted 2006-01-10 02:23 AM


I can sense the brush strokes as if it were a painting.
Excellent

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

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7 posted 2006-01-10 02:29 AM


Nicely written. Dang, it's been eons since I saw your name in here. It's good to read you again Fee!
Fee
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Posts 381
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8 posted 2006-01-10 05:39 AM


Wow... Thank you all so much for your comments. Those of you who remember me, just know I did not forget you, you carried me through some times. I never really left but am back and blown away by the talent that has since joined.
Warmest of hugs to all.
Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

Larry C
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9 posted 2006-02-16 08:26 PM


Fiona!
What a heart. So giving and more. I really like this one a lot.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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