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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-01-08 10:05 PM



I dropped my ego on the ground
then turned around to see if it
was trying to recapture me.
Thankfully it stayed behind in the dusty dirt,
allowing me to move forward
into safe sanctuary,
onto soulful stepping stones,
which led me to a reflecting pond
where I chanced to ponder
how these feet did wander
so far away from my original concept of self.
I concluded this convoluted journey
followed the only meandering pathway
my soles could hope to follow.
Leaving some ego in the dust was all right
as long as I remembered to hold on tight
to self-esteem, and walk boldly forward,
free spiritedly into my own life light.



© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-01-08 10:10 PM


"Leaving some ego in the dust was all right
as long as I remembered to hold on tight
to self-esteem, and walk boldly forward,
free spiritedly into my own life light."


There you go   Not an easy lesson to learn sometimes, but worth it in the end.

and then He created the horse...

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2 posted 2006-01-08 10:34 PM


Tis good to keep a bit of Ego, yanno

Lest your Id get lonely


(The hugs have been delivered, thank you)

*smile*

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3 posted 2006-01-08 10:41 PM


thanks sky!
grins here (yer strokin ID)

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4 posted 2006-01-08 11:11 PM


Some ego in the dust is ok.nice poem.paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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5 posted 2006-01-08 11:36 PM


"where I chanced to ponder
how these feet did wander
so far away from my original concept of self.
I concluded this convoluted journey
followed the only meandering pathway
my soles could hope to follow."

And what a long, strange trip it's been.  Hiya Kacy...  

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6 posted 2006-01-08 11:39 PM


readin me, are ya? lol
smooches to ya, Dunc

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7 posted 2006-01-08 11:40 PM



..."I remembered to hold on tight
to self-esteem, and walk boldly forward,
free spiritedly into my own life light."

~ You shine, Kacy!

Love & Light,
Linda

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8 posted 2006-01-09 01:44 AM


Kacy, you're certainly a free spirit -- couldn't be a free spirit if you had too much ego pulling you down...lol!  Enjoyed this.   ...jo
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9 posted 2006-01-09 08:57 AM


*smiling here*

I love this . . .

Keep trying to toss mine out the window.
I think it likes this apartment . . .

*grin*

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10 posted 2006-01-09 09:39 AM


Leaving some ego in the dust was all right
as long as I remembered to hold on tight
to self-esteem, and walk boldly forward,
free spiritedly into my own life light.


Yep, this is how it should be, Kacy.
Hugs,
Ethel


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11 posted 2006-01-09 01:47 PM


You know you are so good at titles that just make my mind think crazy thoughts! Not that I want you to stop. But I come in here and make myself look like a jerk and then laugh my butt off for hours.

I was gonna say and I tried to pick it up but it was too big! It was a joke, lighten up everybody. I love you sis but can't help myself.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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12 posted 2006-01-09 02:17 PM


Don't pay any attention to Larry, Kacy...you know where his heart is, and it's in the right place.  I admire the free spirit that you are...however you got to that place...stay!!  
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13 posted 2006-01-09 03:46 PM


at your reply, Larry C!
hey, it WAS getting a bit heavy

thanks everyone, for your wonderfully kind remarks!

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14 posted 2006-01-12 11:25 AM


"...as long as I remembered to hold on tight
to self-esteem, and walk boldly forward,
free spiritedly into my own life light."

I like this write a lot   Thank you for sharing your search for a "better you!"

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

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15 posted 2006-01-12 01:17 PM


Leaving some ego in the dust was all right
as long as I remembered to hold on tight
to self-esteem, and walk boldly forward,
free spiritedly into my own life light.


incredible...both the poem and you, enjoyed this a lot!!!!

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16 posted 2006-01-12 02:51 PM


Litterbug!!!!!




Good stuff!

Midnitesun
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17 posted 2006-01-12 03:04 PM


thanks everyone

at the icebox reply

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18 posted 2006-01-12 04:21 PM


Yes, Midnitesun, I agree.  It is important to be able to distinguish between ego and self-esteem.  Some of the former doesn't do any harm, but a lot of the latter is essential.  You made a very good philosophical point here.  I enjoyed your poem.

- Owl

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19 posted 2006-01-13 08:55 AM


The conflict of ego and self-esteem bedevils us all.  You've done well with your choices and your writing shows it.  Well done. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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20 posted 2006-02-15 01:45 AM


It is wonderful that we do not possess EGO, but are simply possessed with the idea of ego. And it is wonderful that by Grace, our Minds are renewed and our sight given clarity. Wonderful writing !!!
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21 posted 2006-02-15 04:40 PM




"which led me to a reflecting pond
where I chanced to ponder
how these feet did wander
so far away from my original concept of self."

I really love this poem Kacy.
Well said.



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