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CMGrimm
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0 posted 2006-01-08 08:30 PM



Close your eyes
and follow me
I'll show you worlds
you won't believe.

I'll give you wings
and take you far
We'll cross the moon
and chase a star.

Close your eyes
and listen close
It's the words I speak
that mean the most.

I'll make you feel
your passions true
I'll make you see
this world all new.

Just close your eyes
and drift along
on my river of words
on my stream of song.

© Copyright 2006 Christopher M. Grimm - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2006-01-08 08:32 PM


And a wonderful song you sing Christopher.
Very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-01-08 09:24 PM



Chris, as graceful
as a lullaby...


coyote
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3 posted 2006-01-08 09:25 PM


Very good rhyme, meter, and stanza structure here, Chris.

Enjoyed.

CB 8)

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-01-08 09:42 PM


CMGrimm
I often think like that. Enjoyed the read.

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5 posted 2006-01-08 10:07 PM


Enjoyed thanks for the read

and then He created the horse...

Edward Grim
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6 posted 2006-01-08 10:15 PM


Nice poem, I enjoyed it, especially the end. And I can't help but see a similarity in our names. Brother? Just kidding. Cheers    - Ed
Fee
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7 posted 2006-01-09 03:01 AM


Written so well and touched a place in my heart.

Cheers, Fee

garysgirl
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8 posted 2006-01-09 04:07 AM


Chris, this is so beautiful. Thanks
for sharing!!
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
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9 posted 2006-01-09 04:19 AM


Traveling through your poem was like traveling through a song -- much enjoyed the flow.   ...jo
tracie66
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10 posted 2006-01-09 04:33 AM


WOW!!!
breathtakingly beautiful, loved the imagery and the graceful flow of your splendid write...well done!

~hugs~
Tracie


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



littlewing
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11 posted 2006-01-09 09:10 AM


This is lovely, made me smile and a much needed one too.

Thank you.

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2006-01-09 09:13 AM


CMG ~ What woman could refuse such a dreamy offer!?! Delightfully sweet and romantic!


EA


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13 posted 2006-01-09 10:16 AM


Okay, Cutie Pie~
Got MY eyes closed ...
And singing~
This is enticingly beautiful~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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CMGrimm
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14 posted 2006-01-09 05:53 PM


thanks everybody...

Ed, i don't think so, but maybe I do have family in Florida

Marge, and a beautiful song you are singing dear

thanks again everyone else, its a pleasure to be back in here learning again.

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



dgvarner
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15 posted 2006-01-11 12:16 PM


sounds like the "blue pages" speaking to us...   

very nice write..

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

CMGrimm
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16 posted 2006-01-11 04:05 PM


thank you dg again for kind words...
uhmm...do the blue pages really talk to you??  cause seriously, if they do...ya might wanna see 'bout that...
lol
thanks
chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



dgvarner
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17 posted 2006-01-12 11:27 AM


uh..why, yes..yes they do...they speak in whispers..of many voices...   heh heh...

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

jinx26
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18 posted 2006-01-12 06:15 PM


Close your eyes and listen close
it's the words I speak that mean the most Beautiful!! jinx

CMGrimm
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19 posted 2006-01-12 11:19 PM


lol...
and .. um... what exactly are these little voices saying?

lol

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



dgvarner
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20 posted 2006-01-13 12:02 PM


Oh...well..they say things like..

"Close your eyes
and follow me
I'll show you worlds
you won't believe.

I'll give you wings
and take you far
We'll cross the moon
and chase a star..."


What..they don't speak to you??  

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

CMGrimm
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21 posted 2006-01-14 11:28 PM


lol...yeah sometimes they do.

My "shrink" tells me not to listen to them though...


lol jk

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



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