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scorpio
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0 posted 2006-01-08 09:55 AM



Always

Always?
  She asked.
Yes
  I said.
Not together?
  She questioned.
Not together
  I sadly said.
Spiritually?
  She pondered
Yes.
  I said.

believe in what your heart feels...

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-01-08 10:04 AM



Now there
is some food

for the soul.

Always.


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2006-01-08 10:28 AM


A spiritually pondering poem! Love of the soul lasts longer than the love of the flesh.

May 2006 find you enjoying both at the same time!


EA

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3 posted 2006-01-08 10:37 AM


scorpio - this really touched me this morning. how lovely!!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

scorpio
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4 posted 2006-01-08 11:15 AM


Thank you Karilea. Much appreciated.

Linda thank you.  May 2006 bring you happiness and good health.

Chris I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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5 posted 2006-01-08 03:45 PM


Forever?  
She questioned
Yes...
Forever,
Said he.                                    
Together..forever..spiritually.  

Slightly sad, yet very tender thoughts dear Scorpio.
Made me stop and ponder...
isn't being together in spirit
for all eternity, a very important aspect,
of being in love?

~Smiles, Hugs & Luv ya, Tinker~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

SmartChick
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6 posted 2006-01-08 04:00 PM


This is sad.
scorpio
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7 posted 2006-01-08 05:15 PM


Enchantress, you've given me something to ponder.  Thank you for your warm support.  Your encouragement means so very much to me.

Thank you for stopping by Smart Chick.  Much appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

SoundWaves
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8 posted 2006-01-08 07:46 PM


Good write.

The spotlight can only get brighter.

scorpio
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9 posted 2006-01-08 07:53 PM


Thank you Sound Wave.  Much appreciated!

believe in what your heart feels...

CMGrimm
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10 posted 2006-01-08 08:36 PM


very good .... i love when u make me think...

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



iliana
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11 posted 2006-01-09 01:58 AM


I liked this!  I've said it, too -- it is bitter/sweet, but I think true.  
playing.with.crayons
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12 posted 2006-01-09 02:40 AM


I really like this... there's something about it... I don't know. It's a special one, this write. well done!! xxx

farewell the ash-tray girl

Fee
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13 posted 2006-01-09 03:05 AM


Never give up on Always, you have written so much more than the mere words you penned.

Cheers, Fee

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14 posted 2006-01-09 04:01 AM


Scorpio, this is so beautiful. It has
a longful love felt in it.

A connection of the spirits is so much more for
eternity than mere love for the body.
Yet, it is so good to have both, isn't it?
Hugs,
Ethel

scorpio
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15 posted 2006-01-09 11:53 AM


CMGrimm thank you for your support.

Thank you Iliana.  Much appreciated.

Thank you for the "well done" Playing.with. Crayons.

Your comments are most kind Fee.  Thank you.

Ethel thank you for your kind support.  I do appreciate it.

believe in what your heart feels...

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