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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2006-01-08 09:47 AM




We are, as one heart
verse, word, a song to be heard
among Passions blue.
To this craft be ever true ~
always let your quill write you

© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-01-08 09:50 AM


Karilea~
For such a lovely Sunday morning Tanka ... I 'tanka' you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -           noles1@totcon.com     

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2 posted 2006-01-08 09:55 AM


Beautiful indeed Karilea..
Love this start to Open 37.
Love the new pic!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

scorpio
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3 posted 2006-01-08 10:00 AM


Eloquently written Karilea.

believe in what your heart feels...

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-01-08 10:30 AM


...and your quill is a beautiful thing to behold, Dear Heart!

A wonderful poem with which to start off this new forum!

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

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just out of reach
5 posted 2006-01-08 10:35 AM


Oh, you knew I would love this!
Perfect.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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6 posted 2006-01-08 10:40 AM


Let's make that a pledge, for this forum! I owe this place a bunch of poetry, and it's time I started listening to the ol' pencil...even though the bluesbird is singing to me, these days....

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7 posted 2006-01-08 11:13 AM


Words spring up in mind
Forming ideas of life
Communication
Showing our soul to others
Seasoned with heart and courage

Well done, Karilea and yes!, a great pix.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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8 posted 2006-01-08 12:33 PM


sheer and absolute beauty


Martie
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9 posted 2006-01-08 01:21 PM


sissie....a lovely beginning to a new forum.  
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10 posted 2006-01-08 02:21 PM


I think that is called 'using your head'

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11 posted 2006-01-08 03:29 PM


Kairlea, this is a wonderful tanka. One I true like.
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12 posted 2006-01-08 04:38 PM


Always....
How true, Karilea.

The price of passion....?

Billy 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

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13 posted 2006-01-08 06:52 PM


True words spoken.

:-)

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14 posted 2006-01-08 07:44 PM


How could I not?

(ink gets me high--y'gotta buy the good India stuff--grin? spank me later)


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15 posted 2006-01-08 08:32 PM


I love this...  thats all that really needs to be said...

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



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16 posted 2006-01-09 02:14 AM


Loved it! (Miss you, too.)  jo
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17 posted 2006-01-09 03:03 AM


Beautifully written.
Cheers Fee

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18 posted 2006-01-09 04:06 AM


Hi Karilea,
I love this beautiful tanka, you have so gracefully
penned for us to enjoy. Thank you, dear Sunshiney One.

Oh, and I love the new picture, too!!
Love your hair!! Very pretty!!
Hugs,
Ethel

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19 posted 2006-01-09 04:45 AM


Dear sunshiny girl~

loving your heart here, beautiful dedication to passions and all who reside within her blue walls.

~hugs~
Tracie

in blue~
writing true to hearts
passions in blue
hearts binding together
in blue~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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20 posted 2006-01-10 03:55 PM


I love the idea of the quill writing me, and through me and... Lovely work sunshiney one.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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21 posted 2006-01-10 04:01 PM


me thinks me quill has that down-packed....

I just hold it *grin* to save it from toppling over.... it does the rest.

Always love your writes Sunshinygirl



Mxx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

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22 posted 2006-01-10 09:23 PM


This is very good Karilea.  I think it points out why we write as we do, and who we are.  I love it!  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Anne Shiever

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23 posted 2006-01-11 05:31 PM


As always, your words warm.

Hope the new year is good to you, Karilea.


Corinne

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24 posted 2006-02-11 01:41 AM


How amazing what transpires from pen to paper when poetry begins.  I think this is so apt.  The quill does write write us, and unfold the author like a four o'clock flower.    

Thank you for the warm welcome!  I am going to have to figure out how to navigate  this site a little more easily.

Karen


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