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Huan Yi
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Through snow
Beneath an arabesque of branches—

On a frozen stream
A young boy is hunting


© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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A tantalizing taste here, John.

I can't help but wish for more of it.

Margherita
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Could be an image of eons ago.
Love the "arabesque of branches" vision.

Love,
Margherita
Huan Yi
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Margherita,

Well . . . maybe not “eons”

Thanks for reading

John

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It's just lovely John.
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can be anything.
I would say that it was the image of  father.
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