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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-01-07 03:11 PM



Through snow
Beneath an arabesque of branches—

On a frozen stream
A young boy is hunting



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2006-01-07 03:30 PM


A tantalizing taste here, John.

I can't help but wish for more of it.


Margherita
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2 posted 2006-01-07 03:32 PM


Could be an image of eons ago.
Love the "arabesque of branches" vision.

Love,
Margherita

Huan Yi
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3 posted 2006-01-07 06:55 PM



Margherita,

Well . . . maybe not “eons”

Thanks for reading

John


The Lady
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4 posted 2006-01-17 01:17 AM



It's just lovely John.

Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-05-01 02:49 PM


can be anything.
I would say that it was the image of  father.

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