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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2006-01-07 12:04 PM




the time was perfect in this dream
she reappeared in my world
what does this signal mean
what is the forgotten magic
we seem to know
do i know you from some other place
some other time
looks can be deceiving
all on me ... it's all me
whispers of statues and fame
the flow of power ... energy
..vibe , emotion rush through me
as you speak
a brave journey
wise souls find each other
hopes to see that look in your eyes
once again


the future opens its doors
and allows my passing
will my wildest dreams come to be true

      
          
JDW III 11-2-2000  


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ice
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1 posted 2006-01-07 04:37 AM


"the time was perfect in this dream
she reappeared in my world
what does this signal mean
what is the forgotten magic
we seem to know.."

That's it, Wolf...We once knew the magic, and now we have forgotten it...The four legged ones still know, as do the winged ones...and so do the leaves that turn towards the sun...but we, in our sorry state have forgotten...

There is more to this poem than just a dream...I have crossed my eyes and looked deeper into it..

Brother Ice________  ____
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2 posted 2006-01-07 05:18 AM


quote:
the future opens its doors
and allows my passing
will my wildest dreams come to be true



We do co-create, no doubt.

I would say: follow your dream, everything you need is within YOU.

Beautiful, profound verses.

Love,
Margherita

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3 posted 2006-01-07 05:51 AM


this write had such an impact. beautiful words.

farewell the ash-tray girl

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4 posted 2006-01-07 09:29 AM


Beautiful Wolfie...
I knew I was going to love it.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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5 posted 2006-01-07 12:11 PM


brother ice - your reply was right on the mark , you know just how i feel , thanks for reading and giving me such great reply
... to the dreams and animals ...may they prosper

Margherita - yes i believe your right
it is all in the mind and heart , anything is possible

playing.with.crayons  , an impact hehee i like that ...thank you kindly for the comment : )

Nancy : ) glad you liked ... more to come later .....

peace 2006 ~J wolfie


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6 posted 2006-01-08 07:32 AM


the future opens its doors
and allows my passing
will my wildest dreams come to be true

      
          
I hope so J.  Always remember though that they were yours and you have to live with them.

The Grey

Accept that some days you're the pigeon, and some days you're the statue.

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7 posted 2006-01-10 03:30 AM


thanks grey , i will live with my dreams any time

  " the only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams " - tupac shakur

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