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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 01-06-2006 11:29 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

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Heart Beat

In the utter of impart
I heard the flutter of my heart
Beating ire of desire
A dragon spewing fire

Seeking in each draining power
Essence of its living hour
Gulping in each seethe of air
To breathe the fire of its dare

Each beat draws in a tighter skin
Drawing on the will within
Echoing the walled abyss
Searching out each tell tale kiss

Like hands that stretch before the blind
Seeking out a touch to find
The promise of a gardens space
The harbor of foreverís grace

Itís when naÔve can chart believe
That part of art, can have its Eve
© Copyright 2006 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


1 posted 01-06-2006 11:51 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Good morning, Sweet Sonneteer!

Seek and ye shall find

~ "The promise of a gardens space
The harbor of foreverís grace"

Yet another fine spill from thy quill!

Love 'n hugs,
EA

Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


2 posted 01-06-2006 04:39 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Afternoon dear Sy!
Yet another lovely from your magic pen.
Have a great weekend.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...


3 posted 01-06-2006 04:59 PM       View Profile for MARK V SHELDON   Email MARK V SHELDON   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit MARK V SHELDON's Home Page   View IP for MARK V SHELDON

Seymour, I don't know how you do it, but it seems that each poem you channel is better than the last!  This one really resonates with me -- especially the stanza before the ending couplet...  Awesome imagery!  A wholesome, healthy, and jovial New Year to you, my friend.

-MVS

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tracie66
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4 posted 01-06-2006 09:10 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

loved all of your poem dear Sy but the 4th stanza my fav....simply devine write

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


scorpio
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right...there


5 posted 01-06-2006 09:41 PM       View Profile for scorpio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for scorpio

Sy well done!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Magnus
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6 posted 01-06-2006 10:20 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

I do so much enjoy your little tales that
you compose so perfectly...
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


7 posted 04-26-2007 07:19 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

To breathe the fire of its dare~~
bringing you back to life

perfectly you, Sy

M
 
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