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ladynovice
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0 posted 2006-01-06 08:02 AM


I looked at you
And I knew
The pulsating sensation
Proved I wanted you
I longed to touch
So very much
And hold you close
Was what I needed most
The things I tried
To be by your side
A caress on your thigh
A hug goodbye
And a brush of my hand
Was what I planned
All my sensations
Proved my greatest expectations
A desire I could no longer contain
I knew I would never be able to abstain
I wanted you, I needed you
This I had to gain
Ever so soft and gentle
As if it was incidental
I reached to you for that long awaited kiss
What I got I will forever miss
Ecstasy and longing exploded
That was what was bestowed
Your kiss was like electricity
Filled with so much felicity
Hungrily I sought your lips
I was in my own solar eclipse
My tongue tried to dampen the fire
But I had reached ultimate desire
The quivering in my stomach and my groin
I knew that you and I had to join
Did you feel the same thing I did,
Was your heart pounding like mine
Was it a feeling you can not define?
The constant tingling kept the fire going
My burning desire was what was growing
It had erupted in me
And I was to decree
I never knew it would happen
You were my much long awaited passion

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Margherita
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1 posted 2006-01-06 10:08 AM


Fire!

Enjoyed your passionate rendering of a magical encounter!

Love,
Margherita

ladynovice
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2 posted 2006-01-06 11:20 AM


Thank you Margarita
CMGrimm
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3 posted 2006-01-07 01:15 PM


someone could only be so lucky to have you feel that stongly about them...fantastic read..thanks for sharing.

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



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4 posted 2006-01-07 01:24 PM


this write is hotttt !!!!!
what a blaze of passion
dang !!!! ~wolfie

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2006-01-07 04:29 PM


Your words were filled with passion and desire.  Great write.

Take care...........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

HopeS
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6 posted 2006-01-08 07:14 AM


Wonderful expressed passionate desire


Hope

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