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Shallow is the Soul
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Shallow is the Soul |
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RhymeThyme New Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 6Calif |
Hello and Happy New Year to all! I didn't see an intro page so before posting my first I thought I would say hi and thank you all for alloowing me to be a part of this site. Amanda Shallow is the soul, whose feelings are locked up so that no kiss shall ever spring the latch Sorrow fills the heart that will accept no touch to melt the Winter everlasting.. Empty is the mind that will not part with the judgment of others, for they are consumed with criticism. Lonely is the body that recoils from human kindness, for it is solitary. Weeping are the heavens for watching their children suffer so………… |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very wise words, well thought, welcome to our little abode....glad to have you here! |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Welcome Amanda, nice poem. Cheers - Ed Grim |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW! fantastic intro and poem, can't wait to see more from you  Welcome to Passions, I'm sure you'll enjoy it here. ~hug~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
Welcome to this wonderful place. You're going to like it here! Nice writing! jm |
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RhymeThyme New Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 6Calif |
Thank you all for the kind words, all I see here is great work and I loving family, it is inspirational. Amanda  |
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