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Margherita
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0 posted 2006-01-05 08:25 PM






* * *

Mia adorata

* * *

Your voice
weaves sunbeams
around my heart
clearing away
all trace of gloom

long forgotten tunes
spiral through
my mind
like eagles
high up in the sky

unburied like
gold treasures
from under decades
of dust the sounds
of love resonate

within my
pounding breast
I grasp the subtle
essence of you
opening all my
energy channels

Mia adorata...

Like fine
paint brushes
dipped in gold
your words
colour my world

the solace of
secrets unveiled
makes me ride
waves of pleasure
into freedom’s
wide expansion.

I breathe deeply
wrapping myself
into the warmth
of this moment
stretching across
time and space.

In awe we pause.
Nothing more
needs to be said.
Tongues rest
while we savour
the fading echoes
of love’s talk.

Mia adorata…

* * *

Love, Margherita


© Copyright 2006 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-01-05 08:49 PM


Like fine
paint brushes
dipped in gold
your words
colour my world

What a beautiful picture you paint for us with your words. Causing us to stop and admire. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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2 posted 2006-01-05 08:51 PM


so very soft and beautiful..
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2006-01-05 08:54 PM


Margherita~

The pure love that shines forth from this penning is so YOU ... I believe that had I read this anywhere on the Internet ... that I would have recognized the heart from which it came~

'Like fine
paint brushes
dipped in gold
your words
colour my world'


Indeed, dear lady ... you dip into a gold-gilded inking well~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~



~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -             noles1@totcon.com     

Sunshine
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4 posted 2006-01-05 09:06 PM



And the person on the receiving end
must be sighing loudly by now....




Honeybunch
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5 posted 2006-01-06 12:28 PM


Beautiful expression given to the beautiful emotion of love from one with a beautiful heart!  I'm in a "even love lost is beautiful" mood today so have a beautiful day!


Helen  

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2006-01-06 08:41 AM


"Mia adorata…"

Ever notice that some words look and sound as beautiful as their meaning?

Wonderful...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2006-01-06 09:13 AM


So much is spoken in those moments that are made just to be.  Wonderful verse.
TD

LeeJ
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8 posted 2006-01-06 09:15 AM


reading you is like panning for gold
there's a garnet in every sentence

Margherita
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9 posted 2006-01-07 08:32 AM


Thank you all so much my poet friends for your generous loving comments.

Sometimes two words are enough to flood us with the gratifying awareness that we are loved.

... and the echoes resonate for a long time.

Love and Joy.
Margherita

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10 posted 2006-01-08 02:10 AM


Silky...James
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11 posted 2006-01-08 02:35 AM


Margherita, you, my dear, color the world with your words of love and adoration.

Simply loverly!

Hugs with love,
Linda


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12 posted 2006-01-08 02:44 AM


"Like fine
paint brushes
dipped in gold
your words
colour my world"

Okay so this has already been quoted, yet I still felt the need to say it is BRILLIANT. yes. the whole write is, but especially this stanza. Very lovely. xxx

farewell the ash-tray girl

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2006-09-19 07:24 PM


Still silk...James
Margherita
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14 posted 2006-11-04 06:41 PM


Thank you!
Love,
Margherita  

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