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Open Poetry #36

Gaining Perspective

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2006-01-04 08:55 PM

Turn me inside out,
I won't rant and I won't shout,
Put your hard boots on
And march about till you're done,
I really don't mind,
But please tell me what you find.
Just stomp through my brain
What's to loose and what's to gain,
I've been long about,
Hid with the moon from the sun,
I'm socially blind
And a hermit without shame.

Gloom

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2006-01-04 11:14 PM

Well, I guess, we are all free to live our lives as we see fit. Right?
In that case, I won't stomp all over you Gloom and turn you inside out.
Umm...maybe just a little shove.

Have a good one. hugs, Chris

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2006-01-09 07:22 PM

And I suppose you want us to believe it all. I'm not yet persuaded. But I do like the write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

3 posted 2006-01-09 11:55 PM

You sound like you are willing to accept anything that comes your way and it won't waver you a bit. You sound strong in your words and in how they come together. I liked your poem.
Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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