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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2006-01-02 04:15 PM



Funny
how i've become the weathergirl
( again )
and how things swing back
to  beginnings over java,
when first awkard introductions
are saved by cloud covers
becoming lighthouses
out of total word darkness,

we stormed soon after,
intense in the passion
no need to stutter
or stumble on converation,

who needed a lexicon anyhow?
in the heat of the moment;

but the stars were siphoned
right when the sky bloomed basic black,
with a twist of our combined madnesses

and alas...
the violins come now,
as you play magic man to another,
with your patented mixed bag
of compassion,humor, shamanism, and
just plain old shoulder to cry on,

so watch the old girl now
tap out a raindance,

though i border on fog fadeout
tempted to hitch a ride
to disappearance
on the next cloud wisp,

its hard to talk
"foggy with a 30percent chance of rain"
after we once stormed the sky together.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-03-2006 08:53 AM).]

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Dominique-Simone
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1 posted 2006-01-02 04:34 PM


Great write you bring great images to life with your work
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-01-02 04:48 PM


You always write some of the best I read

dave

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-01-02 05:31 PM


That is one clever write, Goddess of Nature!


Linda

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
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4 posted 2006-01-03 12:26 PM


aww Michele, I am going to run over there and smack ya one . . . it will take me about a week to get there on foot . . . then I have to swim . . .

*smile*

I must say this write, so many lines I wish I had penned myself.

Be good to you.




Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2006-01-03 12:52 PM


Oh, but your weather words can chill and heat up a body at the same time!
It's weathering the constant storms that takes the wind outta us.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
6 posted 2006-01-03 02:50 AM


Wonderfully penned!  Nature and mankind - maybe if we settle down then nature will.  
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
7 posted 2006-01-03 05:38 AM


quote:
so watch the old girl now
tap out a raindance



So very intense, dear Michele!

Passionate and melancholic, perfectly penned.

Love and hugs.
Margherita


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2007-04-26 07:36 PM


its hard to talk
"foggy with a 30percent chance of rain"
after we once stormed the sky together.


sighing~~ missing your words

M

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