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Eliyah_becomes
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since 2006-01-02
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0 posted 2006-01-02 03:26 PM


Repair my Broken heart
for my soul can no longer bear
this burden of pain

so take this pain
and scream out loud
can anything be forgiven

for a soul that is wounded
time is elusive
hindering

it dances a dance
so full of mockery
that forgetfullness
is but a haze on the edges
moist but not really there

awake I dream
lost in chaos
torn my heart sits before me

shreds remain
I pull the pieces to my chest
weeping

not knowing
not knowing
not known
not at all

© Copyright 2006 Eliyah_becomes - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-01-02 05:43 PM


Eliyah~

'time is elusive' ... oh what a lovely thought~

WELCOME to PiP ... enjoy your stay ... read lots for there is much inspire in the thoughts sprinkled here~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -           noles1@totcon.com     

Nightshade
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just out of reach
2 posted 2006-01-02 06:02 PM


Welcome to Passions !
Enjoyed your interesting first post.
Have fun here !
hugs, Chris

Magnus
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3 posted 2006-01-02 06:04 PM


The bitterness of love can sometimes hurt
greatly....you have penned your thoughts
well,  welcome to PIP,  Happy New Year!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-01-02 06:10 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS ELIYAH !
Much enjoyed your first post..
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2006-01-02 06:50 PM



Eliyah_becomes...enchanting.

A wonderful first post, poet.

Welcome to Passions!  May all of your time here, become you.


Skyfire
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6 posted 2006-01-02 08:22 PM


Welcome to PiP!

I look forward to reading more of your work, it's strange sometimes how a broken heart can bring forth the best of words

and then He created the horse...

pictureme2
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since 2005-11-13
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7 posted 2006-01-02 10:48 PM


I felt the pain of your broken heart
in words! Welcome to Pip!
pictureme2

shades of paul
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In Reality
8 posted 2006-01-02 10:55 PM


Good first post, enjoyed much..paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
9 posted 2006-01-02 11:03 PM


Very nicely written!  
enjoyed

Welcome to the blue pages!

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

littlewing
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10 posted 2006-01-03 12:21 PM


Welcome to PIP!

This is amazing, I love it!

You write sadness beautifully.


Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2006-01-03 10:17 AM


Loved your first post and welcome to Pip!

Please check your email for a special surprise!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

loved_and_redeemed
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since 2006-01-03
Posts 22
BC, Canada
12 posted 2006-01-03 05:30 PM


Beautifully tragic. It really hit me hard. Look forward to more of your work

[This message has been edited by loved_and_redeemed (01-03-2006 06:55 PM).]

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