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Soulfisher
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where ever the fly fishing is good

0 posted 2006-01-02 11:56 AM


I see you walk
with outstretched arms
and casted shadows
as the sea
sips the milk of moon
from your eyes
in slow drawing pulls
leaving me, to rise and fall
in spirit and self
with every crashing heartbeat of wave
as together we entwine
in slow dance burn
and everlasting bliss
till the stars no longer dance
in reflected shimmers of you and I
and I
I cease to exsist
as I am washed away in you
and you in I

Though it has never stepped past fear
would you still accept my heart
knowing that it is all I have to give.

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Martie
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1 posted 2006-01-02 12:11 PM


Soulfisher

Breathtakingly beautiful and so romantic!!  Love this poem!

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-01-02 04:50 PM


I can see it


Dave

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Gaia
3 posted 2006-01-02 05:17 PM


oooohhh
this one is a keeper
a moonbeam over the seas

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2006-01-02 05:55 PM


Breathtaking indeed.
Wow!
TD

Soulfisher
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where ever the fly fishing is good
5 posted 2006-01-04 11:45 AM


Thank you everyone for your replys and hope everyone is having a happy new year.

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