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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-01-02 08:28 AM


Passing Color

In the swirling local color
We catch the dream of discover
We’re drawn into its chaos mass
In hazes of our eyes that pass

We sail into a wonder land
A chaos of dimensions band
To swim within impossible
To try and make it touchable

We cut the cord of natures tie
And rise into the sky to fly
To turn the moment of a wile
To paint to pink a beaches Isle

To weave it to a cross of lace
Each nuance of our love and grace
To place within our given time
The changing of our dust and grime

It is to me an open door
To see into forevermore



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ethome
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1 posted 2006-01-02 08:39 AM


Nice work Sy!

Isn't this the way with us poets..."To swim within impossible
To try and make it touchable"

Oh how we love that virtual stuff and it fills such a need sometimes.

Love it man.....
Eric

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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2 posted 2006-01-02 08:50 AM


A wonderful blending of words and images this morning Sy. Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-01-02 09:29 AM


scorpio
Thank you for the well done and have a good new year.

ethome
Thank you for the wonderful comment. Have a wonderful year.

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4 posted 2006-01-02 11:09 AM


To weave it to a cross of lace
Each nuance of our love and grace


Such beautiful, wise words.
Thankyou Seymour.
Happy New Year to you and yours.
hugs, Chris

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-01-02 11:14 AM


Happy New Year, Mr. T.!

"We cut the cord of natures tie
And rise into the sky to fly"

~ Up, up, and away! May 2006 be one of high spirits and joy!

Angel huggums,
EA

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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6 posted 2006-01-03 05:25 AM


Gosh, I need your attitude, Sy.
Happy New Year, indeed.

tracie66
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Australia
7 posted 2006-01-03 05:28 AM


Oh Sy
this leaves me breathless, I love your way with words...wishing I could have just a small piece of your talent

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2006-01-03 08:32 AM


Chris,
Thank you sweet.

Earth Angel
I'll rise into the sky with you by my side.


littlewing
Everybody can forgive.

Tracie
LOL it takes talent to see talent.

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