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The Lady
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0 posted 01-01-2006 03:44 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Lady


was here last night
just happened to be in the neighborhood
Iím hungry she said  
I made a peanut butter and jelly sandwich
    ...you need to eat better  
donít mess with me  
you know Iíve got ADD
and Iím having a hard time focusing
do you need to write a poem  
Iíve got a couple of things on my mind  
left over from another poem
woman down the street  
Iíve got polestar  
now thatís a helluva word
     ...I donít know
how about blue silence
can you work that in somewhere
why do you keep putting words here and there
keep them in a straight line
    ... whose poem is this?
itís yours
I donít write poems
I inspire them
...youíre not very inspiring tonight
listen lady
itís late
what do you want
for a lousy peanut butter sandwich
and then
she took my last banana and was gone

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Martie
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1 posted 01-01-2006 04:13 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

ahhh, Lady...they can be such teases, can't they?  Mine sure is.  Try this!  
http://piptalk.com/main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=82&topic=000519
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Saluting with misty eyes


2 posted 01-01-2006 04:14 PM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

UH... does your Muse know my Muse??? Perhaps they are sisters... evil sisters.
This is a very well done write about a very common subject here on the Blue Pages.

"...and as we drift along, I never fail to be astounded by the things we'll do for promises..."
Ronnie James Dio

Dark Angel
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3 posted 01-01-2006 05:11 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Me thinks your Muse and mine have hung out together.

Enjoyed

thank you  

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Dominique-Simone
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4 posted 01-01-2006 06:08 PM       View Profile for Dominique-Simone   Email Dominique-Simone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dominique-Simone

listen lady
itís late
what do you want
for a lousy peanut butter sandwich
and then
she took my last banana and was gone

Very True... these muses are very self absorbed
The Lady
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5 posted 01-02-2006 01:41 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


Thank you all. Yes, muses are so hard to please, such teases and so pushy. Ours probably all know each other. Yup DS, they are very self absorbed and probably all have ADD. Gotta love them though. Just hide your bananas.
The Lady
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The Southwest


6 posted 01-02-2006 01:43 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


Oh Martie.. I love your muse poem. Thanks for inviting me.
Earl Brinkman
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7 posted 08-01-2010 09:43 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

You make me afraid of muses.  Very afraid.
 
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