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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-01-01 12:56 PM


I often write what are ideas to come back to and keep bits of writing that in themselves are great but diminished by the rest of the writing that often clouds the original

May be the rain has set in

Dave

Clouds gray
Swarm a darkened night of dreams
Hammering wet pavements
With drizzling perfect expressions of red torrents of power
Striking impunity energy sound colour words misunderstandings
As gathering skies attack pleasure and innocence
To echo mountains
Driven wild
With swarming fiery pestilent answers to a Sun’s day

Rain was heavy drifting on those dull
Sparkling waters
Under leaves

Teach me heart
It's all that matters
Teach my life
It's not in shatters
Let the rain
Make me whole again
Let the truth
Wash away my pain



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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-01-01 05:17 PM


Teach me heart
It's all that matters
Teach my life
It's not in shatters
Let the rain
Make me whole again
Let the truth
Wash away my pain


my favorite verse~~
M

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