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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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your ocean swarms along the edges of me it buries verses and parts the sand at my feet between my toes foaming sea-quakes and poetry endless waves just below the surface there where, the swelling and my solitude await your brine… decorated in reeds of submission with reeds of another heart still your feet call to me, like two bells beating a handful of seeds, sowing us together how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 can I have this?  |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
This is very sensual writing, Maree. The metaphors and analogies are exquisite. You're a natural! Thanks, Billy 8) "Only the dead, have seen the end of war." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What an extraordinary tribute, Maree! Truly, like to bells! Happy New Year!  .....jo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 smile...I know those are chalices, not bells, but this is surely what came to my mind as I read.  Have a happy one, m'love. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
it buries verses and parts the sand at my feet between my toes foaming sea-quakes and poetry WHAT an image! So beautiful. Library! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree Deep and layered with meaning, your poetry. Happy new year! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful Maree, how you decribe love between the Earth and the sea . . . the swelling and my solitude await your brine… and apply that . . . the feet too, very sensual. This also reminded me of a Hendrix tune, "Angel": "Angel came down From heaven yesterday, Stayed with me just long enough To rescue me.... And she told me a story yesterday; About the sweet love between the moon and the deep blue sea. Then she spread her wings high over me. She said, I’ll come back and see you tomorrow...." |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"your ocean swarms along the edges of me it buries verses and parts the sand at my feet between my toes" It's all simply lovely. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
wow! breathtakingly beautiful, I absolutely loved this. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wish I could have written this~~~ maybe someday... Happy New Year M |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
still your feet call to me, like two bells beating a handful of seeds, sowing us together ~when you write your poetry book make sure this goes in it because it is awesome m ,  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your words are magical and bells ring long after the pen strikes. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you, each and every one of you, you're all too kind. Please k now that I appreciate you sooo much. Thanks again M xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
damn woman, you collapse me when you write... wow Bella, this is downright captivating.... Loved it sweetie. HUGS and have missed you terribly much. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderful, wonderful imagery. Fabulous meter and rhythm. I wish I had written this. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I just find myself drawn back to this one...breathtakingly beautiful. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
gotta wipe the sweat from my brow..you are poetic genius |
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