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Open Poetry #36

Reason with me

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2005-12-31 12:58 PM

REASON WITH ME

Let us
Challenge me
Let us be unforgiving
And fierce
Let us throw
At full force
Questions unanswered
At my door

"Skies above
And hell below
Tell me
What's my destiny?
What's MY destiny?
Tell me
'Cause i don't know"

This you ask me
Unloved as you be
Hurting and lost
Loveless and most
Sure to see
The answer in me

Well, I don't know what to say
You cannot ask this from me
I struggle too deep on my way
To lend my hard won treasures to thee

Remember my dead love
I gave you my heart and everything
When you uncivil and rude
Loved another instead

So sail away
My unintended
Sail away
Frail and unmended

.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2005-12-31 02:46 AM

ahhh a goodbye . . . never ever nice, are they?

I am sorry -

but in this, a very strong tight write.

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

2 posted 2005-12-31 05:27 AM

Much enjoyed!

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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