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sometimesitslonely
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since 2005-12-27
Posts 41
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0 posted 2005-12-30 02:17 PM


The city lights are burning bright,
burns the town down,
and for a second,
I am thankful that I left,
that my secret was kept,
because I couldn't remember it.

Hearts were thrown around,
years of this has broken me down,
I felt the fear crawl up my spine,
with your smile things were fine,
but you're no longer here,
and today this ends.

This smile is fake,
These tears aren't.

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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
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1 posted 2005-12-30 02:39 PM


Sounds like you had enough and are ready to move on.   Good luck to you.

miscellanea

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Gaia
2 posted 2005-12-30 06:55 PM


welcome to Passions!
I enjoyed this 'secret' burning write

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