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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-12-29 12:53 PM



I feel your yearning

lightning flash of memories

the past in still life

©2005 by icebox

© Copyright 2005 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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1 posted 2005-12-29 12:59 PM


excellent
Martie
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2 posted 2005-12-29 01:03 AM


dreams come in the dark
in color red I am dressed
mornings I forget

You do this so much better then I can...always an impact.  

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2005-12-29 02:25 AM


Yes, of course it's excellent.  It's what we've come to expect and you never let us down.
Happy New Year!
Helen

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2005-12-29 07:11 AM


It is there always

in the heaviness of heart

a life in reruns

enjoyed your thoughts this morning
M

pictureme2
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5 posted 2005-12-29 10:01 AM


Bravo!
picturme2

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just out of reach
6 posted 2005-12-29 10:15 AM


this is wonderful
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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7 posted 2005-12-29 10:19 AM


eek...I feel naked!

Your words have a way of getting inside me.

  but that is because you are a master.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2005-12-29 01:03 PM




I think we are all lonely.

The saddest part is that I think we all choose to be...

a kiss, then?

Dark Angel
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9 posted 2005-12-29 03:23 PM


Yesssss!

perfectamento!

M

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Edward Grim
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10 posted 2005-12-29 03:48 PM


Erma Bombeck said “Dreams have only one owner at a time. That’s why dreamers are lonely”. Nice poem icebox.   - Ed Grim
iliana
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11 posted 2005-12-29 07:53 PM


Thought provoking, and I liked the contrast of the flash with the still.  Yes, that's how it feels.
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