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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-12-28 11:32 AM





But while you are waiting

'In her eyes were eyes

In her body was knowledge

In her experience was thought

Of who could be somebody

Met her in childhood hidden by a tree and her growing fast as I slumpt

In never knowing what was free

Met her in an office

Met her again

Met her several times

Again and again

Met her in Old Oak

Or Forests in Barnes

Met her image all my life

Met her in stone

She was freedom when I met her

Freedom to learn

She was freedom when I met her

Freedom to yearn'


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Gaia
1 posted 2005-12-28 03:07 PM


enjoyed this look
at lady Freedom

Ericc
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2 posted 2005-12-28 03:31 PM


A poignant read Bodger...well done.


Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2005-12-29 12:51 PM


It was more an observation

Thanks

Dave

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