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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2005-12-28 07:06 AM



and now a gentle morning of whispers
soft clouds with manly hands
that bathe the skin in warm

a lover's eyes on your smile
and a day dreamer's dreams
in swirl of your charms

a safe place with carpeted trees
and meadows of music
where the sun is behind the hedges

and the ocean touches your ankles
a place for you to be alone
with the thoughts of your woman

or a place for you to draw a lover
in the sand
and when you lean low to kiss

he knows your lips from memory

_________________

daark

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-12-28 08:25 AM



A soft whew...

I mean, er, view!




Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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2 posted 2005-12-28 09:44 AM


Oh Mr. D., this is a new favorite!

Reminds me of a beach walk I did one time with a friend who took my hand in the most comforting of ways.

  Thank you for letting me remember better times.


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Martie
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3 posted 2005-12-28 10:04 AM


DS

....sensual and sincere....a winning combination  

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with you
4 posted 2005-12-28 10:25 AM


*SIGHS*

ohhhhh I do love this one....

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2005-12-28 10:30 AM


ms sun...thank you for whewing me with your touch here.

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susanC, you always smile me with the way you consider my pennings

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ms martie, thank you neighbor for your lady eyes on these suggestions


suesea, it is a pleasure to be kept by your thoughts, thank you little friend

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