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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-12-27 09:18 PM



your feelings crash in me

at his moment of entry

why do you hold on

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1 posted 2005-12-27 09:20 PM


Well done.

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2 posted 2005-12-28 02:06 AM


....because that's the only time when it really counts....

You've caught something vital here -- well done indeed!

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3 posted 2005-12-28 02:16 AM


icebox - they say that anything linked can be broken or disengaged but as for "shadow links", I 'dunno'.  Do you?

And I agree with the above - it is the only time it counts.

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4 posted 2005-12-28 02:19 AM


instinct

my heart

beats...instinct.

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5 posted 2005-12-28 02:54 AM


totally awesome ice !!!
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6 posted 2005-12-28 03:39 AM


besides, my thighs are locked.


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7 posted 2005-12-28 04:00 AM


Good question...
iliana
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8 posted 2005-12-28 04:31 AM


An ocean of depth in this one.  A wise one once said that it takes three years for the shadow to disconnect.  I would guess that this is only if one is willing to let go, too.  Hope I have interpreted this correctly.
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9 posted 2005-12-28 05:33 AM


Sometimes there's nothing else to hold on to except the idea that consciousness breeds connection through "Shadow Links" that just might materialize.

Well done.

Eric

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10 posted 2005-12-28 09:32 AM


icebox

why?  fear and delight and the automatic nervous system.  Ya made me think with this one.  Enjoyed!!

Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2005-12-28 09:36 AM


Because you are hard to let go of?



Somedays I would love nothing more than to sip some coffee and listen to you tell me about the world.

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