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Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2005-12-27 01:35 PM


ELEGY FOR A DREAM

The sun has set
Too far behind the mountain
Too deep below the horizon
And silence arise
The same as when a great love dies
Come, my dying love
And join me in a last dance
To the sound of breaking hearts
Join me in a waltz
To the requiem
For a dream

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jinx26
Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38
Jersey
1 posted 2005-12-27 01:47 PM


And silence arise
the same as when a great love dies

in the last four months, i have felt this every day...... Jinx26

Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-12-27 01:51 PM


I am with you in your in more ways than I consider but what did honesty have in love

Dave

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2005-12-27 02:31 PM


ahh this is just perfect, I love it . . .

reminded me of Saul Williams . . .


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