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jinx26
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since 2005-12-12
Posts 38
Jersey

0 posted 2005-12-27 01:25 PM



I see myself putting my hands around her beautiful, hatefull neck.....
But how could I....
I gave her Life... My daughter...
I take a deep breath....
Count to 10....
Thinking back.... On how I was then....
Telling myself it's just a stage....
Her mouth runs without thinking....
Her attitude.... pours hate.....
She is just like me.... at that age.
Full of herself.... and with rage.
Hard blue eyes.. Blonde, Beautiful....
I wish back....12,11,10,9,8....
But right now.... she's full of hate.
I tell myself it will end....
She'll relize....I am a friend....
Not just her Mother....Filling her in.
On life....
Always changing.... For us!!!!

Love,Heart,Head,and Soul...For you Alexis

             I Love You!!!!

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ManOfWolves28
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 83

1 posted 2005-12-27 05:27 PM


Sounds like a rebel child in the making if I read this one the right way. Have a good one.

May the winds sweep through the moonless sky....

Jeep Monkey
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since 2005-12-18
Posts 96
Chaos
2 posted 2005-12-27 06:38 PM


He is 13
And both pleasure and pain
Do I find as I rear him
No two minutes the same
The Stetson and Drakkar
Oooze from beneath locked door
And the clothes that I wash-
Three outfits since Four!

I love the humor you bring to this wonderful age!  And I am thankful it is a 13 year old boy I have at this age right now, and not a girl!  Bless you!  It wasn't until I was 23 and had a child of my own that I claimed my mother again and befriended her.  Grin - This too shall pass.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2005-12-27 06:48 PM


lol yep,13
but now, my daughter is 18
grinning, as we made it through to the other side! patience and time ....

Savage Quiescence
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since 2002-07-29
Posts 326
Wandering
4 posted 2005-12-27 09:47 PM


It is such a hard and awkward stage in life.

I remember when I was 13 and the attitude I had.. and the strong dislike for my mother.. and now, a mere five years later, and she truly is my best friend!

Hang in there, it's worth it, and she'll thank you.

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