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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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i want you to read me poetry you can watch my toes curl as flames lick from your skull volts zinging this canvas is melting hues a thousand gales could not breathe LIFE yet one kiss from your lips has snapped this mast in two |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
there are times I wish I couldn't feel at all...the longing in this and the culmination has left me a depleted sail.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
How the heck do you reach right into my chest and pull that out? I know we relate so much in THAT way - what this speaks of . . . but you are far from depleted Karen . . . but I know where you are coming from.  So? You wanna read me some poetry? |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
this is HOT little !!! to the touch what a blaze , i knew you had it in ya  xoxo ~J |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"you can watch my toes curl as flames lick from your skull" GREAT inage!!!!!!! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Got to agree with icebox here! Enjoyed the read and images. Thanks! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
a thousand gales could not breathe LIFE yet one kiss from your lips has snapped this mast in two Bowl me over why don't ya Lil Susie...Wow!  m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
We all need to be snapped and when we find the one that can do it we should hold on to them. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you guys, I am so so happy you guys liked this, am trying something new - a series of writes about knots - different kinds of knots and as you can probably guess this one was envisioned while lying by a river . . . Thank you . . . |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Truly beautiful, Sue... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"down by the riverside, down by the riverside..." lol, snapping masts, eh? loved this one, susieq makes me want to... never mind  |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
Powerful little write. I like it! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Littlewing, this one sizzles! best martyjo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
WOW |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Now that's poetry! "Only the dead, have seen the end of war." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful writing, Sue! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
knots last longer, when those that are bound, allow some movement outside the binding ties. thanks for the river view |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I had to come read this again... it really IS beautiful, Sue... "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (12-27-2005 11:19 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you again everyone, I am surprised to see how much you guys like this one. Makes me smile and also to see all the different interpretations makes me very happy. Thanks guys. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
LOL @ Kacy..."down by the riverside....." I believe I already told you this was wonderful... And I see there are many who agree! and yes...the longing is evident |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Everyone's really flooring me today. You always do. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now I sure didn't read this as being down by just any ole river, and I think I can tell you the one it is  T'was a beaut, this was. And now I am really laughing at Kacy's "down by the riverside" comment. Get it, *nudge, nudge*? Carpe' Diem |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I want you.... ~*~ doesn't that say it all? |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
girl~ your poetry blows my mind~yes, yes, yes~ much love~ ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
very nice |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
whoa, thank you everyone, I am so happy this got a good response . . . makes me smile. |
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