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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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spaced out from the rest a little bit different the way i talk could cause a thought to be as it is meant to be waves far from my body i see them in the oceans swimming free JDW III |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
This is chewy. I've read it over and over again in one sitting. I shall return to it again. Short. Easy to read. Definition full, though. I'm inspired by words that cause so much thought. JM |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and I see... dolphins... in sunlight beam... thank you, Sir! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Jeepers .... your reply gave me much joy , i think i will write some more tonight ... the urge to write comes and goes just like the wind ...i try and grasp the thoughts that swirl about me  peace Sunny one so kind thanks for reading and for helping me out with my edit woes lol peace to you also ~and much love to all wolfy~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
all ya need is the right hook, line and sinker....winkies  to tow em inNice work here Wolfie m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more ~Neruda~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I see words forming thoughts and lingering there - you afraid to say them, you are grabbing them all up for when the time is just right . . . |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
darky angel... lol i loved that reply LOTS, it fit in place purrfect ... the hook, line and sinker lol it towed u in ... there has to be a santa claus!!!! xoxo peace ~ littlewings ... how did you know lol thats just what i do ... your so clever littles you know me toooo well hahaa jus kiddin babe peace oxox time to go howl at the moon i feel loved , pip rocks ~!!!! ~James [This message has been edited by aujussy wolf (12-27-2005 12:31 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey James *smile* it was this part and yes, I do know you i see them in the oceans swimming free made me think of words floating about . . . |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
very cool yeah its that time time to pick the words from the air like apples in an orchard , on a warm sun-lit morning ... the time to look at life with the eyes of a child (an old moody blues song ) ... i love winter the cold and snow make me long for the summer nights ... anyhow peace to you littlewing from across the great lake.. ~James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write. Eric |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
thanks eric howls ~wolfman |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
The whole thing is wonderful |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
a perfectly awesome short write. much enjoyed. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
Great write man, love the title also. Peace, bgj |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Dominique-Simone thanks for checking it out Nightshade so happy you enjoyed this one ((hugs)) too bgj thanks the title was right where i was at that day , in my own daydream cafe peace to all , thanks for the looks ~JW |
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