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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-12-26 01:44 PM



Grass bristled in hollows that hummocks provided comfort

In our own little terraine

Words paled in our feelings hidden unseen special

In our own little ways

Life sought and bought as we purchased ourselves

In quietness in pleasure

In our ways  allowing life to find us acknowledge us

In our feelings of a summer's day

Between morning and high noon

© Copyright 2005 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-12-26 03:18 PM


Now this sounds lovely...

I always flip outta hammocks though.

But I love the idea of them.

thanks as this warmed me up a bit

Bodger
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2 posted 2005-12-26 03:38 PM


Your cold is a bit more severe than ours

I've put the stew on, frying some veg, another pan with some light meat, herring and I have forgotten the lemon

On my way as I finish typing this

Have a Great New Year

Dave

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3 posted 2005-12-26 11:00 PM


lol, hummocks are not the same as hammocks
but this IS a loverly write
and if you fall outta hummocks?
lovin yer take on this, K

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4 posted 2005-12-27 12:07 PM


nice dave, hope you had a nice xmas

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Bodger
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5 posted 2005-12-27 12:31 PM


take care

Dave

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