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Open Poetry #36
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DejaEntendu
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since 2005-12-06
Posts 82
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0 posted 2005-12-26 07:23 AM

hi everyone.
Haven't posted a poem in a little while, but I think this on's alright... Any suggestions/ thoughts are welcome, and much appreciated. Thanks.

Hopeful

I need your voice
in my ear,
I just need to hear,
you,
all of you,
before I'm gone.

Insomnia materializes,
as I gaze at the phone,
I've never left,
I still wait,
as anxious as day one.
© Copyright 2005 G Rapp - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2005-12-26 01:52 PM

I remember writing something once

and I wont repeat it but welcome back

Dave
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-12-27 12:02 PM

hopefully, that thing will ring for you again
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