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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-12-24 07:03 PM


Why does that feeling always be an image that waft of what might be

Was it the touch of fingers on something
Was it songs that match
Was it

Love

Was it a choice of where you lived or no

Just you

Have I ever known that some thing

Is always there

You are never there for me

But is this your mother’s teaching

As wear something in bed

And I bought you

The long gown

Were you in vision waving that night

On a bus that led to something you took with you to live with the money but bear mine

Was it that something

And another day yes a repeat


For those who know who they are:

                     Duty


On a mountain side trees drifting their gentle boughs for my lonely tower
That pities the wind freezing the soul
Consuming us naked and whole
As looking far into my life
Stark staring wind you are my knife
Plunging into my heart break
Wind my friend I am yours to take
I raise my eyes to your shadow enveloping the grey sun threads between your thoughts as you sacrifice and I face my own fear

I will call to the wind that makes a mountain fair
I will see my thoughts echo
I see you standing there
Storms above challenge my regard
Dancing on my soul
Raining through the shard
I call to the wind
Explosive as it flows
Carry my wish
As far as you can go

They look aloft and never see below unless it pleases them
They are the lofty folk the world dreams of them
I wait here knowing I will die
They will die magnificently I bye and bye
People will remember them for their sacrifice
The towers burnt in flames of smoke their bodies billowing high
I will die with these men who will curse as they kill
That they who want their loved ones should be fodder for the mill
We will die for ignorance and I will die as my death matters least now
Mindless killing while I watch matters
Soulless killing destroys the killers and killed
Knowing we are the foot
Means a lot to us
Dying as the foot
Means we go inch by inch

I will call to the wind that makes a mountain fair
I will see my thoughts echo
I see you standing there
Storms above challenge my regard
Dancing on my soul
Raining through the shard
I call to the wind
Explosive as it flows
Carry my wish
As far as you can go



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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2005-12-24 07:51 PM


I'll comment that this was a straight blast letting myself, letting - just sitting my brain when I have a few days to have an argument with the lady

but we all think of those past especially those we treasured

The words and the images are something that seems to be special

At Christmas

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-12-24 07:54 PM



Bodger, if you never write
another poem, please know that
I have marked, and libraried,
and lighted this one,

as one that touched me so deep,
I had to read it aloud...

just to imagine the tone of your voice.

It is indeed, a fair ...

one that I will revisit,
again, and again.

Merry Christmas, my friend.

Sunshine

"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron

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3 posted 2005-12-27 12:14 PM


powerfull dave.  glad i stopped by. hope all is well with you.  

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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Gaia
4 posted 2005-12-27 12:22 PM


quote:
I will call to the wind that makes a mountain fair
I will see my thoughts echo
I see you standing there
Storms above challenge my regard
Dancing on my soul
Raining through the shard
I call to the wind
Explosive as it flows
Carry my wish
As far as you can go


yes, Dave
this voice of yours,
it carries itself
within the winds




aujussy wolf
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5 posted 2005-12-27 12:35 PM


Carry my wish
As far as you can go
  
  
good stuff
~wolfman

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
6 posted 2005-12-27 11:19 AM


I promise I will write something maybe more of what I walk away from writing

Many thanks

Dave

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