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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-12-24 10:01 AM







Lost Soul Surroundings

I will never try
to make you understand
because I know there are too many sides
in this, the element of the soul
too short of a corner here
and a mirror from the circus
over there
making false images
as you turn that corner ‘round
and come crashing
to the ground

I can only hope you continue
to travel through this a-mazing soul
searching
because all you have looked for is right…
here…
and I wasn’t ready to give up
nor give flight just yet
unless you do…

regardless that you might want
to wing on alone
I will wing on then, too
albeit in another direction
knowing that I once had you
safe

even though you did not know
the elements of
this soul






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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-12-24 10:31 AM


Beautiful dear Karilea..
A gentle tug of heart strings.
Merry Christmas..
love ya lady~

~Let peace begin with me...     

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2005-12-24 11:01 AM


To let the heart fall fountain is perhaps the best gift we could ever give, or receive.
Hugs, and Merry Christmas Karilea.
TD

Martie
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3 posted 2005-12-24 11:09 AM


Sissie....What TD said is so lovely, I can't say any better.  
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