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ManOfWolves28
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since 2005-12-21
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0 posted 2005-12-23 05:01 PM



I roam the night
I dream of flight
I need not a light.

I cut away limb after limb
Exposing a tall trunk.
Some might assume I to be drunk
Some might call me a punk.

Really it's a matter of staying alive and
warm all winter.

Why does he only work at night?

Why do they ask?

I was born to the night.
Note- I made this up just now. If anyone has some suggestions Id appreciate it.

May the winds sweep through the moonless sky....

© Copyright 2005 J. A. Griswold - All Rights Reserved
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
1 posted 2005-12-23 07:03 PM


Great writing, the images it gives are wonderful.

Welcome to PIPTAlk.

:-)

jinx26
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since 2005-12-12
Posts 38
Jersey
2 posted 2005-12-23 07:21 PM


I roam the night
I dream of flight
I need not a light

Iloved this, it so fits me. To dream of flight!!

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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3 posted 2005-12-24 01:01 AM


Welcome to Piptalk!  I enjoyed your first post.  I imagine there are many in the world that would be thrilled to have the warmth provided by midnight saw mills.  

Again, welcome to the Blue Pages.

miscellanea

ManOfWolves28
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since 2005-12-21
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4 posted 2006-01-31 06:52 PM


Havent been getting any emails to let me know of replies and stuff so I apolgise for the delay on thing. Thanks for the comments.

...If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice.

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