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ManOfWolves28
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0 posted 2005-12-22 04:39 PM




O' thunder and lightning
Show me your awesome power.
Show me blinding light, Deafen me
With your powerful sound......

O' great winds.....
Show me your awesome strength.
Pull up the earth, tear out the trees.

O' great rains....Show me your awesome powers,
Drown the earth, fall until I want no more.
O' great hail storm, Send me
frozen dragon tears.
Pierce me, pelt me, bruise me.

O' great storm of fate
Come and eradicate this place....
Storm rage on and on
Till no human remains then leave me
Upon the highest mountain
So that I may rebuild this earth
As it was intended to be.


-Note-
Originally I wrote this during the month of May 2005.
Modified November 2005.


© Copyright 2005 J. A. Griswold - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-12-22 04:41 PM



For every season,
there is a purpose...

Welcome to Passions, Sir!
A very powerful poem, in light
of this year's events.

I hope that you will find a home
here within our blue walls and halls.

Write on!

"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron

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2 posted 2005-12-22 06:17 PM


Welcome to the Passion's family
much enjoyed your first post!
hugs, Chris

Martie
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3 posted 2005-12-22 06:52 PM


ManOfWolves....I love a good storm too.  Here in southern California we con't see too many of them.  Welcome to Passions!
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-12-22 06:57 PM


I enjoyed your first post very much and am looking forward to more.  Welcome, to Passions.  
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Gaia
5 posted 2005-12-22 07:02 PM


Now that would be one very fierce storm!
WELCOME to Passions! (again)
~reaching out to the wild things~ remembering a wolf story

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2005-12-22 07:09 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...     

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